The Robin
Like an arrow piercing a summer day,the news comes-a good friend,a relative, and old love-all anticlimaticafter our life givers take the walk.A new fissure in the heartto remind , no matterhow dear,...
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seems everybody's got Spring on the brain here lately...lovely poem, Ms. 'beth.names and faces paper the walls,until beyond the window,a robin is seen feeding her babies.it was 'beyond the window'...
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A very super piece indeed, that opening line was just so perfect, I too liked your closing couplet, I wonder why we look out the window so at certain times... great read, BG
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i also liked this write. i did not find it sentimental, which i think, for me at least, would be hard to avoid with such subject matter.Life is cyclical. People leave us, people come to us, there is...
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I'm enjoying delving into this.It's probably just me, but I'm a bit puzzled about the meaning of: ...and old love-all anticlimaticafter our life givers take the walk.
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Thanks smikes for your comment. I do apprecriate your encouragement. Ms 'beth
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Thank smikes for your comment. I do appreciate your encouragement. Ms 'beth
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Thanks blue for commenting. Yes life changes all the time and the robins still sing.Donnabeth
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Plum, it means nothing is quite the same after we lose parents-"take the walk." We have other loses but it's not quite as ,I dunno- perhaps traumatic. At least that's the way I feel. Perhaps because I...
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Enjoyed this greatly. The quote: until beyond the window,a robin is seen feeding her babies. Yes there is indeede light beyond the tunnel. Great Work.Michael Chellew
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I have read this three times -- and it gets better each time. VERY tight poem. Not one one wasted. I especially like love can't deter that parade through the horizon.Makes me think of a line that...
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